.Hollow.Empty.

Coward.

Pathetic.

Touch me again-

I swear

You'll regret it.

a hollow shell that you can't get through

Can you?

No.

Voices are dull

but pain is real

How can you care

when she doesn't feel?

Does it hurt that bad?

Yes, now leave me alone.

It's not merely sadness

it's the worst pain I've ever known.

Good, I got through.

Shut the f**k up,

He's going to kill you.

When he finds out, just you wait

When he finds out you messed with HIS--

Empty threats, girl

Nothing more,

You are no longer HIS,

Now you're mine, my cute little wh--

Shut the f**k up.

Never be yours, NEVER.

and if you come for me again,

if you touch me again EVER

Then I'll deal with you myself

I'll lose control of HER

Trust me, she's furious with you.

Oh, yes, NOW I'm scared.

Tell me, what makes you think they ever cared?

Consider it a miracle I didn't kill you when I had the chance

Your life was in my hands, it was mine to spare.

 

Right, sure.

Listen, you thick twisted piece of s**t,

I'll make this pain ours to share.

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

.....Neh.
Comment and crit appreciated.

Reviews

[Voice11]

Its a lil, disconnected. I dont really have a clear picture of whats going on. Is it someone with multiple personalities? a girl battling with being molested or with an ex?

[Taylor H]

ive read this before....why didnt i review it?? lol oh well. The only critism i can say is just a personal one. When poems are written in this format I find it hard to read but thts it. This was a lovely poem...kinda creepy, but thats a good thing

[Georgia Gypsy]

I get several different visions from this...struggle between two parts inside of your mind, maybe good against evil, or hurt and pain against reason, or perhaps a fight with someone who wants to harm...but you/the writer has protection and power over this entity...this would be a great one to read in a poetry group, you could get some great discussion from it...(but be prepared to explain what you meant by it...i have had people need things explained in small words for them to understand..LOL!)

[Bud]

Wow! Such a powerful and emotional write. Keep up the Masterful works of art!

[Flo_writer]

This is jam packed with Anger and Contempt. Spewed with hate filled threats between two bitter foe's with little love lost. Aveira you present well the written passions of disdain.