Cheer Up Little Loner

Cheer Up Little Loner

A Poem by Marlena
"

I'm being depressing.

"

Drown me in sorrow

it'd be better than this life

rip off my skin

tear out my eyes

maybe then I'll see clearly

I'm a loser

I'm a freak

nothing better coming my way

I'm an idiot

and a loner

but at least I've got you.

© 2009 Marlena


Author's Note

Marlena
I felt sad. Just wanted to rant....Thought maybe it'd be okay to post. :P

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It is depressing but I've felt that way in the simplest of words. Good write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


great peom. i hope you dont think that any more....:( great peom

Posted 15 Years Ago


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No better time to write than when you're down...it is a tool for healing, after all. This is an Excellent expression of your emotion. Keep up the Great works of art!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I agree with the last line,winning in love is what matters..
Drown me in my sorrows,take off my life..could you bring me back hope
Touch my skin,wipe the tears from my eyes,
I see clearly now..I was never a loser,I am a beauty of nature
Everything good comes my way
I could never be more clever
But i was always a loner
But I got you..
That was so nice
I changed the depressing mode,for it was too depressing,I used to read the happy words
It saddened me to read what you said here,life is like that,one day up ,the day down
we should not care a lot about its stupidity,we just laugh and smile at it..life is just a joke
lovely write..

Posted 15 Years Ago



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