Liquid Candy

like drops of liquid candy on the hot sidewalk...

Like drops of candy on the street

you roam

rainfalls and the heat calls

you melt where you stand

words flow on paper

but they've got nothing on you

like liquid candy on the hot sidewalk.

Author's Note

Inspired by the picture above. :)

Reviews

[Voice11]

Very well written. I can just feel the heat of the sidewalk.

[Karen Ingram]

If you hadn't added the note that it was based on the picture above, I would have sworn this poem was about watching someone sexy walk down the street. There's something very sensual about your descriptions.

[Constance L. Hartwell]

Oh how cool. This is a beautiful description of that picture. Great job.