Step With Me
A Poem by
Marlena
We'll take baby steps but we'll get there. Everyone needs a little help sometimes.
Step with me,
one, two, three
step with me,
keep the rhythm,
keep it going,
Stay strong.
Step with me
one
two
three
stay with me,
stand tall.
© 2009 Marlena
Author's Note
Baby steps. ^^ Just supposed to be about how some people like to do things on their own when they really need help.
Reviews
Yah I get that. I think it is a really nice piece. Very simple and sweet.
Posted 14 Years Ago
This was unique, short, and interesting. You portrayed both the helpless and helpful using a technique we're all familiar with on a daily bases..."learning."
Posted 15 Years Ago
This was unique, short, and interesting. You portrayed both the helpless and helpful using a technique we're all familiar with on a daily bases..."learning."
Excellent! I can see multiple meanings in this, too!
Posted 15 Years Ago
Excellent! I can see multiple meanings in this, too!
Very nice! Simple, but it gets the point across. It flows really well, too. Good work!
-Howl
Posted 15 Years Ago
Very nice! Simple, but it gets the point across. It flows really well, too. Good work!
-Howl<3
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Added on May 6, 2009
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Marlena NY
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