Liar

What a cruel joke to play

I'm so sorry I hurt you that way

you're everything to me

and I can see

it's the same for you

I don't know what I'd be without you

I feel I'm a silly little girl

Losing you would be horrible,

I'm so sorry I hurt you that way,

God, what a horrible joke to play....

 

Author's Note

Ummm....Idk? lol, I don't know how I got this ummm......crit? Comments? Thoughts?

Reviews

[Voice11]

wow, a lil deep to not know where u got it from. But good either way. It would be better with a little more detail

[Lexi Nicole]

I like this, it flows really well and there's some good emotion in it. ^^

-Howl

[Tallulah]

I like it the rhyming is good. Why does it seem like everyone i know can rhyme escept me. I love it though.