Deep Sea Blue

Deep Sea Blue

A Poem by Marlena
"

You and your deep sea blue...

"

You can keep me on pins and needles

you and your deep sea blue

you can hold me down

in your eyes I'll drown

you can torture me

Just as long as I can see

that beautiful deep sea blue.

© 2009 Marlena


Author's Note

Marlena
My favorite color, and the color of his eyes (my icon, though his eyes are covered in that) so pretty XD

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This is beautiful so short, but expressed very well you did a nice job keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This could be interpreted somewhat like a romantics poem. I like it. very good!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love this

Posted 15 Years Ago


Omg i love this its soo pretty and sweet.
you can torture me


Just as long as I can see


that beautiful deep sea blue.
^ My fave part.


Posted 15 Years Ago



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