Lord Show Me The Way

I’ve had enough of the devil

I just wanna escape his evil

Lord won’t you show me your endless mercy

And make my life forever rosy

 

I just wanna escape these painful streets I grew upon

Lord won’t you make a spiritual path for me to walk upon

Now my friends say buddy that ain’t gonna happen

You’re asking help from the wrong person

 

But I don’t believe what they say, no I just won’t believe what they say

On my knees I will continue to pray, Oh Lord won’t you show me the way.

Author's Note

Turned into a bit of a prayer!
Feel it sometimes too...

Reviews

[EMF]

As a practising atheist with agnostic leanings the poem didn't read as a prayer. Simply a piece of religious poetry.
The Title may need to be considered. In these times, seeing your title, people may expect a cynical or humerous piece, rather than a work that obviously comes from your heart. That I think is where the poems strength lies. You have a strong belief. That gives this poem as much integrity as any of the multitudinous love poetry that swamps WC.
I do like the feel of it. It makes me smile.
Technically it iss handled extremely well. It has good flow, meter and cracking imagry with a nice Evangelic twang. I have to admit a slight jealousy at the way you handle the words. Really cracking but of work.

[Princess LouLou]

Very nice

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

We all need a higher power, you have presented who yours is quite well. :)

[Daytonight]

Beautifully done. A truly lovely prayer. Keep on penning.

[sugar]

aww that was sooo nice i really liked that

[Samantha Heaton]

good poem i loved it...

[Richielee]

lol, best find your way on your own,the Lord often is too busy to help :)

[StarSandwich]

This is yet another good write this shows a lot. Sometimes we want to escape the evils.

[brenda]

lol i like this ! and yeah who knows this can actually inspire someone but i love this same style but different theme an insight view of what a person wants when to escape and he/she turns to god. awesome !:)