Lord Show Me The Way

Lord Show Me The Way

A Poem by SoulCrusader (Yas)

I’ve had enough of the devil

I just wanna escape his evil

Lord won’t you show me your endless mercy

And make my life forever rosy

 

I just wanna escape these painful streets I grew upon

Lord won’t you make a spiritual path for me to walk upon

Now my friends say buddy that ain’t gonna happen

You’re asking help from the wrong person

 

But I don’t believe what they say, no I just won’t believe what they say

On my knees I will continue to pray, Oh Lord won’t you show me the way.

© 2011 SoulCrusader (Yas)


Author's Note

SoulCrusader (Yas)
Turned into a bit of a prayer!
Feel it sometimes too...

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As a practising atheist with agnostic leanings the poem didn't read as a prayer. Simply a piece of religious poetry.
The Title may need to be considered. In these times, seeing your title, people may expect a cynical or humerous piece, rather than a work that obviously comes from your heart. That I think is where the poems strength lies. You have a strong belief. That gives this poem as much integrity as any of the multitudinous love poetry that swamps WC.
I do like the feel of it. It makes me smile.
Technically it iss handled extremely well. It has good flow, meter and cracking imagry with a nice Evangelic twang. I have to admit a slight jealousy at the way you handle the words. Really cracking but of work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Simple but elegant...I love it so much...May God Bless us all... :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I love this piece! Keep writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


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i adored this piece...
it is really great and i think and im sure that only God can give you what all you want ..
n ice write

Posted 13 Years Ago


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And a good prayer it was! My favorite line is "I just wanna escape these painful streets I grew upon" I feel the exact same way

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I'm so envious of you, you have a style so unique and true xxxxx

Posted 13 Years Ago


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wow this is really good. i love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And I'm praying right alone with you! Love this!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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aww God bless this poem! it was amazing! 100!
(:

Posted 13 Years Ago


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i like it it was nicely sad awesome job :D

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really nicely said :)

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Added on June 17, 2011
Last Updated on December 24, 2011
Tags: religious, short, faith, lord

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SoulCrusader (Yas)
SoulCrusader (Yas)

Badlands, Yorkshire, United Kingdom



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Hi, I'm Yas, 28, from England UK. What do I do in my spare time? Well, I sit at home and perform good deeds :) Please note: When I write poems, don't assume they are all regarding current event/.. more..

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