Sometimes....

Sometimes I just wanna
Sometimes I just wanna
Sometimes I just wanna
Sometimes I just wanna

Sometimes I just wanna
Sometimes I just wanna
Sometimes I just wanna

KILL MYSELF!

Author's Note

Sometimes I think everyone feels like the above, some sadfully more than others. btw I'm not suicidal in its serious form at all!

Reviews

[Enigma]

I agree. Everyone feels that once or more than that in their life. Impressive use of font. Good job. :)

[OT]

ahh haha I love the structure and effect here - most clever! - like that thought that starts small and gradually builds until you just wanna scream it out loud lol! nice!

[brenda]

the writing is so awesom and cool !!!!! i love how its so little then it just pops out of the screen and the picture goes along with it too nice job on this yeah many people can relate to this !

[Lizy Coale]

:( theres another way out! i for one would be quite sad if you did that... its not a healthy feeling, suicide... : /

[ImagineItAll]

Yeah, I can understand this feeling a little bit ;-) I like what you did with the font.

[Yina]

I've had this feeling once an it was absolutely awful! I work very hard not to feel this way. I really like the structure of this poem though:)

[stars are far]

heheehe
so true i feel this daily
and i would like to do it
good work
love that :)

[FugitiveBalloons]

Yeah I know that feeling. I'm having it right now actually. It sucks.