Sometimes....

Sometimes I just wanna
Sometimes I just wanna
Sometimes I just wanna
Sometimes I just wanna

Sometimes I just wanna
Sometimes I just wanna
Sometimes I just wanna

KILL MYSELF!

Author's Note

Sometimes I think everyone feels like the above, some sadfully more than others. btw I'm not suicidal in its serious form at all!

Reviews

[Candy]

I almost wanted to kill myself now.! LOL xD You are really good to give your readers a feeling inside. Thanks honey. (:

[Joiedevivre]

oooh, that form is so creative, unexpected, powerful and effective. Great job!!

[GawjusGirl]

also the message comes out alot,, and the effects are great,, i know how you feel and others feel cause i feel this way to sometimes

[GawjusGirl]

sometimes i feel like this,, but i think maybe you put sometimes i just wanna,, a little too many times.

[Sukriti Suki]

So very very creative. Very very strong and deep. Wow. The message though nearly all of us can relate to. I like how with such less words you say so much with so much depth( literally).

[Richielee]

yea so do i!

[Akshat♥]

hahahaha...
interesting...goooooooooooooood!!
sometimes i also want to do this..

[Daytonight]

Wow! This has an amazing effect. Great form! So true also. Well done. Keep on penning.

[Linda]

Wow, structure is so perfect xxxxx

[*skittlez*]

w0w that is s0 weird