Sometimes....

Sometimes....

A Poem by SoulCrusader (Yas)

Sometimes I just wanna
Sometimes I just wanna
Sometimes I just wanna
Sometimes I just wanna

Sometimes I just wanna
Sometimes I just wanna
Sometimes I just wanna

KILL MYSELF!



© 2011 SoulCrusader (Yas)


Author's Note

SoulCrusader (Yas)
Sometimes I think everyone feels like the above, some sadfully more than others. btw I'm not suicidal in its serious form at all!

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Short, but powerful write. And yes, we have :/
I like how the font does the popping effect :P

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I was so excited to see what's after the "sometimes I just wanna" then BAM D=
T__T Don't kill yourself :3
I don't want you to die D:

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Like others said the font increase, adds so many layers!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've unfortunately been there. To keep it from happening again, everytime a really good thing happens I say to myself, "I wouldn't have done that if I had killed myself."
Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Been there, done that. I know how you feel. but dont! we need you
*hugs*

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

believe me there are times when everyone wants to jump of the highest tower they can find:) unique:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the way you plyes with your font is magnificent...give the full impact of how depressive you are!
short but powerful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

first of all the format is super cool and freaky.
but the subject very sad. i understand though, i feel like this very often. life is hard and unfair. :( i'm sorry you've gone through so much to feel this way

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this write because I know how it feels. I feel like I want to kill myself sometimes as well. I love how you start off with the words all small and they get larger. That brings the effect of the poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 5, 2011
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SoulCrusader (Yas)
SoulCrusader (Yas)

Badlands, Yorkshire, United Kingdom



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Hi, I'm Yas, 28, from England UK. What do I do in my spare time? Well, I sit at home and perform good deeds :) Please note: When I write poems, don't assume they are all regarding current event/.. more..

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