Goodbye

Yeah, a poem on heartbreak. Its my first on this kinda subject, so please tell me where I'm going wrong!

One word, "Goodbye"

Thats all it took

You left me

Without a thought

 

I wanted you

Needed you

Loved you

But now I know you

 

Don't I?

 

You won't come back

You have someone else

I'm just an old toy

A broken plaything

 

You've got more now

You don't need me

But I wish I could tell her

To stay away from you

 

Because I know you now

She doesn't have to get mixed up in this

Just remember, a week ago

You swore undying love to me

 

And just a week later

You went back on every promise

Every kiss was a lie

You never loved me

 

Did you?

 

And you don't really love her

You just want another trophy

Its just a game to you, isn't it?

To see how many hearts you can break

 

I'm not the first

And I won't be the last

You've broken my soul

How can I ever trust again?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[*** Hey Jude***]

I have seen to many games played when it comes to the heart. To love is to respect. As you state so painfully you were thrown away for the next toy. Sad but ever so true that adults partake of this childish behavior. Well done! ~ Jude :-)

[Jenthura]

Personal experience? or maybe just a writing experiment. I wouldn't know; I don't do romance or broken hearts in my works. Why am I even posting here? It's a nice read anyhow...

[Lunar Lightning]

I almost cried after reading this. Just a few days ago this happen to me so I really connected. Great job

Luna

[Marilu Elizabeth]

i luv it^^ sounds familiar to my life lol

[[Mackenzie]]

Oh, I like this one ^^
'And you dont really love her
You just want another trophy
It's just a game to you, isn't it?
To see how many hearts you can break.'
Those lines made the poem that much better :D
Keep writing!