Don't Rain

More like a song...but poem was the only thing close enough

Winter in spring, bring yourself to me.

Don't run or crawl, please just walk.

I can wait all day, just don't let it rain.

Snow and sleet, let it all wet my feet,

Just don't let it come down, don't let it rain.

 

Cloudy days all summer long.

Please write me a better wrong.

I can't stand to stand around and wait

If all it's going to do is rain.

 

Today is cold when your tomorrow's hot,

And your yesterdays haunt you to the core.

Everything seems as though it is what it is not

You've only a name, and one foot out the door.

Taking everything you've got,

Taken everything, you're going to drown.

Baby, don't let it rain,

I can stand for anything, but your tears raining down.

 

I'm amazed, by the way you hold me

And I'm surprised, by the way you care.

I'll jump when you say jump, anything you could dare,

baby, just don't let it rain.

I can stand for anything, except your tears raining down.

 

Don't let me fall, don't lose yourself.

I can stand for anything

Just don't let it rain.

I'd give up heaven, and walk through hell,

I can stand anything

Just don't let it rain,

 

Your tears falling down.

Don't let it rain,

Baby, don't let it rain.

I can stand for anything,

Just don't let it rain.

Don't let your tears rain down.

 

Filthy rich

Or dirt poor,

All you'll ever have

Is a name, and one foot out the door.

Taking everything you've got,

Taken everything, you're going to drown.

Baby, don't let it rain,

I can stand for anything, but your tears raining down.

You've only a name, and one foot out the door

Taking everything you've got,

Taken everything, you're going to drown.

Baby, don't let it rain,

I can stand for anything, but your tears raining down.

 

I'd give up heaven, yea.

I'd give up heaven, and walk straight through hell.

I can stand anything,

Just don't let it rain.

 

Your tears falling down {anything but that}

Don't let it rain

Baby don't let it rain{please please please}

I can stand for anything{don't let it rain}

Just don't let it rain,

Don't let your tears rain down.

Author's Note

This doesn't exactly have rhythm that I recognize and could tell you to sing it to. Just try to figure it out(:

Reviews

[*Evelen*]

This was really good! I liked it a lot :). Adding as favorites. Well done:)

[Numb]

I liked it. Me being me, I didn't read the top part that said song and I thought to myself: 'Hm, quite a repetitive poem' then I started paying attention and re-read it.
I really liked it, it was interesting to read and it gave off this type of emotion that I could relate to in a way, but it still felt ominously familiar (I don't think that last sentence made much sense xD)
You're a very good writer/song-writer; don't let anybody tell you any different.

+N+

[Mauricio Montoya]

Right now, where I’m at, it raining so I chose to read this one, the funny thing is there’s a girl I sometimes see where I eat, but not to day cause it’s raining. What a trip,
Excellent song.