Prolog

With a long-drawn sigh Yuki rang at the front door, clutching the handle of her black suitcase firm.

She didn't want to be here, but she didn't had an another choice. Much better as to get stuck into a terrible youth home.

The door opened and infrot of the black haired teen stoodher old childhhod friend, Winry Rockbell.

Winry's eyes sparkled as she saw Yuki.

"There you are Yuki. We have been waiting for you. Come in!"

The blonde took her free hand and pulled her inside her house.

"It change a little since I was the last time here." said Yuki and looked around.

Winry smiled at the 17 year old teen. She had missed her friend all these years very much and she was happy that Yuki would now live with her.

"Come we let Granny know that you are finally here."

Yuki only nodded and followed her into the big living room. Grandma Pinako sat on the couch, smoked and screw on a Automail.

"Granny Yuki is here."

The old, short woman turned to the two teens and smiled. "Nice to see you again Yuki."

"It's nice to see you too Grandma Pinako."

The small woman turned to her granddaughter, "Winry would you be so nice and bring Yuki to her room? I'm sure she's tired from the whole trip and want to take a break."

"Of course." smiled Winry, "Come Yuki."

Yuki nodded again and followed Winry, with her suitcase in tow, up the stairs.

'I hope I'll settle down here and can finally forget my past forever.'

Reviews

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Is kind of interesting she sent her upstairs, now she has to deal with her every time she wants to leave the house.

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but she didn't had an another choice: had is supposed to be have
Any way I usually don't look at the mistakes. But lets get to the positive part. The prologue seems quite intersting and I can't wait to read the rest. Keep writing!