Hunting

Hunting

A Poem by Sophimare
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For the anti-hunting people

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Hunters have got to learn:
Messing with deer and elk
May mean the men being hunted,
Instead.

© 2020 Sophimare


Author's Note

Sophimare
Please review, I am wondering what good punctuation would be for this?

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Hi, SM : )

Good stuff, thinking that turn-about is fair play … what's good for the goose is good for the gander … what we hunt can quickly turn to hunter if we should become too uncaring, disrespectful, and wasteful with the lives we take.
Animals may learn to defend themselves, if we become too greedy in our killing for nothing but sport and for the sake of killing, alone, and leave them no choice.
Always be grateful and respectful for the food we take from Mother Nature.

You asked: "I am wondering what good punctuation would be for this?"

Hunters have got to learn:
Messing with deer and elk
may mean the men being hunted,
Instead.

Thanks for sharing this all-important poem/message, and the for the privilege of helping.
Blessings to you, with a sparkling new year! ⁓ Richard 🍃

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Hi, SM : )

Good stuff, thinking that turn-about is fair play … what's good for the goose is good for the gander … what we hunt can quickly turn to hunter if we should become too uncaring, disrespectful, and wasteful with the lives we take.
Animals may learn to defend themselves, if we become too greedy in our killing for nothing but sport and for the sake of killing, alone, and leave them no choice.
Always be grateful and respectful for the food we take from Mother Nature.

You asked: "I am wondering what good punctuation would be for this?"

Hunters have got to learn:
Messing with deer and elk
may mean the men being hunted,
Instead.

Thanks for sharing this all-important poem/message, and the for the privilege of helping.
Blessings to you, with a sparkling new year! ⁓ Richard 🍃

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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