Love Life

Live every day like it's your last x

Living life is one thing

Loving life is another

You gotta make the most of everything

And live each day like it’s the last

Every move you make

Every rule you brake

Is then set in stone

Inerasable, irremovable

You can’t undo the past

So make your choices wisely

Have fun, live long and free

Do what you want, within reason

Don’t wish your life away

Enjoy each and every moment

And savour the happy memories

Don’t you agree?

Author's Note

Sounds mad but I always find it easier to write peom when they rhyme..so please help me correct/improve this piece! x

Reviews

[Sophster300]

Thanks LareBear and no, I did not mean to spell break as brake, thanks for pointing it out :)

[LareBear]

If you live, then live
Live your life to the fullest
Yes, I do agree

-A haiku review

Question: Did you mean to spell "brake" that way?

[rae52]

really really good
see told you you are great at writing

[Sophster300]

poem* and thanks JugHead985 for your positive comment :) x

[JugHead985]

i like it there is rhythm, and it tells a story. if you are just starting to write this is fine. not every poem should rhyme.