The Car Park Tragedy

The turn of a wheel

 

The lift of a bar

 

The Family drive through in their new shiny car

 

Pushing a trolley

 

A father screams ‘HOLLY!’

 

The burning of rubber

 

The screeching of brakes

 

People often forget how many lives are at stake.

 

Poor Holly fell over

 

The car couldn’t stop in time

 

If Holly had looked she would have been fine.

 

As Holly lies in a hospital bed

 

The Doctor walks over and pronounces her...Dead L

 

Holly’s Dad began to cry

 

He couldn’t believe that Holly would die

 

On such an ordinary shopping spree

 

He grabbed hold of her wrist rather tightly

 

It was too late, nothing he could do

 

To bring back Holly, the cold statue.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[TheKaylaPup]

i like the rhyme pattern.

[rae52]

hey i'm sure i have read that before