Carmel Candy aka Candy Candy

Carmel Candy aka Candy Candy Verse 1 He's a sweet unjust plague, Rooted so deap, I cry out for him in the midst of the night, The name rings through my head, Plagueing my every thought and feeling, I want him so bad here by me Chorus 1 Your my

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Please excuse grammar and formatting issues, I'm still getting a hang of this editor.
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Backround; This is a Song I wrote on homecoming night of my sophmore year, after my boyfreind of eight months broke up with me. The song is about, how the guy plagued my thoughs and self, and sbout how, I needed comfort at any coast.