Tropical Storm

 

 

Wind blowing,

Trees blowing,

Trees flying,

Everything flying,

Glass breaking,

Docks breaking,

Waterspouts coming,

The ocean is coming.

 

Reviews

[Butterflymom]

You have betrayed a feeling of absolute powerlessness of a storm in very few words. This is very well done, and well stated.

[lovelyricalpoetry]

Awesome! You have covered so much in so few words. I really enjoy your writing.

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whoa good poem

[Shadow Writer]

This makes me want to duck and run for cover. :) Well penned. Phantom........

[Viper]

This is a good poem about the hurricane.It describes it so well.Unfortunately so many lives were lost to this kind of storm.Great job.