I Am With You Still

From birth to death some are with us still.

 

In the quite times

When all lights go out

When assailed with doubt

I am with you still

 

In the quite morn

In busy noon day

Life’s demanding fray

I am with you still

 

When life seems too much

Praying yields nothing

Flower with bee sting

I am with you still

 

When days gone, night comes

Life didn’t go your way

Now you see bright day

I am with you still

 

Your hand I will take

Light beheld with eyes

In rest body lies

I am with you still

Reviews

[Titus McGuire]

I see this as a religious piece. From the moment of conception to the moment we are laid to rest, God is with us in this world, He never forsakes us. Every moment of every day He is there, His love and patience unyielding; His presence eternal. Great write. Bravi.

[Jackson Krauss Blind Pa..]

hah, this one is great, really gets the emotions flowwing because we all have someone we lost, someone we will meet, and it's neat to think they're there for us.

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Full of love

I liked it

"In the quite morn
In busy noon day
Life's demanding fray
I am with you still"