Love's Hypocrisy

Thoughts on christianity hypocrisy

 

The bow was knotted so prettily

Atop her hair it sat

Dressed up in her finery

On a pew she sat.

In the front her family poised in a row

 

In the back her family hidden in a row

On a pew she sat

Dressed up in her sisters dress

Atop her hair it sat

The simple ribbon tied so prettily.

Reviews

[Lee Lee]

This was a great play of lines. I really enjoyed it.

[Viper]

This one was a very creative poem.I liked this one.Telling how she looked and all.Nice.

[Shadow Writer]

You do create poems that make you think and explore, as you search for answers. Enjoyed. Phantom............