Three Girls and a Boy

A simple poem about the different lives that my children have lived while I have been growing up.

 

She chose to succeed

She’s been down a road that is hard

She has much she needs

She’s had a life that’s left her scarred

 

She has a good heart.

She’s not perfect, yet she is kind.

She is also smart,

She’s wise and listens, her mind’s bright.

 

He is also bright

He’s often misunderstood

He is my loved knight

He’s sacrificing, and he’s good

 

She loves her best friends

She’s not had it hard

She likes to go with the new trends

She’s never been scarred

 

They choose to succeed

They’re not perfect, they rise above.

They ‘oft do good deeds

They’re my children, they are much loved.

Author's Note

This is one of my first poems. I am generally weak with meter and foot. Suggestions will be both considered and appreciated.

Reviews

[Viper]

I like how you wrote about your children that's very sweet.I have written one about each of my daughters that I will eventually put on here.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A lovely poem showing your love and appreciation for your children and their sucessfulness. Wonderfully written. Thank you for sharing. Debileah