Be what you are.....

This presents the reality of this fake world and how bad we feel by knowing the realities of this big shinning world. This, boost us to accept us as we are.

In life,a time comes sometimes when everybody feels low...
And a similar time had came in my life, when I felt So.

At this time of solitude,
I thought about the world which is so rude.

A general passing thought. . . . That whom to trust or whom to not,
Made me suffer alot.

The person with whom you spent most of your life,
Its commonly seen. . . . Will be the one to stand opposite to you with a knife.

No one deserves your trust today,
And there is not even a chance of deserving someday.

Then, I shattered all these thoughts from my mind,
And accepted that real world is only of this kind.

As the life is all about carrying ON and ON,
I decided to be what I am and happily move on.

Reviews

[Jo Billygoat]

a descent review and suggestion by J.A.B., I'd suggest trying jab's approach but do as most writers do, write what you feel and how you like, trying a different writing style in poetry comes over years, I was ridiculed in a few poems for not rhyming but other defended poetic freedom and that not all poetry needs to rhyme so whether you write in rhyme or without rhyme ridicule will come, just be you and write as you feel and let the critics do what they do and move on

[Sonal Kohli]

Hehhee...sure sir i will take this in consideration and try that
Thanks alot for your guidance :-)

[J.Arthur.B]

have you try writing without rhythm?
I know it might be a hard call, but then, not been compel to rhythm will give you more freedom to go where ever your want with your text. I feel like there were parts were you had to go to one direction in order to maintain the form
take this as a constructive review

regards

[Sonal Kohli]

Its my honour sir...thanks for your guidance.
And sir you are right, i have never tried free writing because i can use rhyming without any difficulty.
But i will surely try what you said sir :-)

[J.Arthur.B]

you're welcome.
feel free to lecture me out as well, we all need recommendations.
read moreyou're welcome.
feel free to lecture me out as well, we all need recommendations.

[Sonal Kohli]

Sure sirr :-)

[Shabeeh Haider]

it is sad when someone who you trust lets you down or stabs you in the back. Life is often filled with these sad lessons.
I like your positive attitude to carry on in life with a smile

[Sonal Kohli]

Thanks alot for your reviews :-)
Its the bitter truth and we have to accept it as we don't have any other option .

[Hardik Lalwani]

enjoyed reading your work :D

[Sonal Kohli]

Thanks for appreciating :-)