I will free myself...surely... I WILL .

This art throws light on d frustration we people have somtimes in our life and how we are the only people who can help ourselves to come out of this and free our soul from this burden and stress.

Loneliness, Loneliness all around..
In my little world my soul is bound.

I am chained,
And my mind is strained,

By breaking this chain..I want to fly high, very high..
But this fake world, doesn't even allow me to have a relieved sigh.

Thousand people tried and even I know, its next to impossible..
But somewhere in my heart, I know I am capable.

I will free myself because I have a strong will,
Yes ! I will. . . . Surely ! I will. . . . .

Loneliness, Loneliness all around...
I will have a huge world and my soul will be unbound.

Author's Note

I want you experienced people to guide me...and give some comments or compliments for it.
Its my first step and want you to appreciate my initiative
Thank you :-)

Reviews

[Gaurav]

The only way to free yourself is to unthought your brain...let not any prejudice or preoccupied notions guide your beliefs...believe in new, because you have to see many beautiful things...great poem..keep it up :)

[Sonal Kohli]

Thanks sir :-)
And yes...according to me self confidence is d first step to become a succeessful personality

[Shabeeh Haider]

Life is such that we are all bound and chained. It is difficult to break free from them but your poem sends a very positive message.
We have to have faith in ourselves to move ahead

[Sonal Kohli]

Thanks sir...for ur appreciation :-)
And yes sir... hope is the only foundation of our life