A Song For Lost Siblings

I'll love you till the end...

You know what is worst than lies?
A lost brother and broken ties.
He was the one who stole my heart,
And things are now falling apart.

You know you're doing things just for the sake,
When your tears are real but your smile is fake.
And now that you have gone, darkness is all I see,
So, here is a song for you and me.

Oh I know! Oh I know,
You need to fly and learn to grow.
And now that I shall set you free,
Promise me , you'll reserve a place in your heart, for me.

Author's Note

Constructive criticism is always appreciated!

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

How could I miss this one....? Very heart touching. Loved it.

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you soooo much!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome ☺

[Ayush Mishra]

Again a nice concept and great ending..... "Promise me , you'll reserve a place in your heart, for me."

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much! You make me so happy xD 😀😀

[Shweta]

Its a wonderful poem..beautifully conveyed

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you for reading it!😍

[Anjali]

It's incredible. The line 'you know you're doing things just for sake, when your tears are real but your smile is fake' is my favorite, it's really relatable. Keep on writing!😊

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much! 😄😄

[Anjali]

Your very very welcome!