My Classroom

Welcome to my havoc-heaven!

"Good morning, students

Good morning to one and all."

Says the class teacher

As the first morning call.

And as the students open their eyes

They wish the teacher in sluggish voices

The entire classroom of 41 students

is filled with heavy, snoring noises

"Today we shall start with Maths."

Says the teacher with a scorn

While the tired and lethargic students

Can only whine, crib and mourn

Mrs. Jones caught one boy

sleeping with his hands on his head

and Mrs. Jones scolded a girl

Who joined two benches to make her bed!

Every morning the children are tired

And fight with their mothers for skipping school

They rather not mug up and cram

But instead stay illiterate fools

On the first bench sits a boy

Who never talks or screams

Whereas the last benches are filled with students

Lost in their own dreams!

In the middle row sit some girls

Who steal and smuggle tiffin-boxes

God knows why they come to school

When they are as cunning as those clever foxes!

And as soon as the bell goes off

The students wake up and smile with glee

As if they were never tired

Because now it was time for P.T!

Welcome to my lovely class

Where every day we have some fun

Sometimes we enjoy so much that

Even all the teachers run!

Author's Note

Constructive criticism is always appreciated!

Reviews

[heartspeaks]

FABULOUS! it was truly nice....
"God knows why they come to school
When they are as cunning as those clever foxes!"
Hahahaha this was crazy... just my point of view. same pinch!
"While the tired and lethargic students
Can only whine, crib and mourn" superb rhyming and choice of words.
"Sometimes we enjoy so much that
Even all the teachers run!" This used to happen almost all the times hahaha...
It was nostalgically creatively and sweetly funny.
Keep going . I look forward to read more of your works. All the best . :)

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much! 😍😄

[heartspeaks]

Thank YOU actually , this poem lifted my mood which was a little off from about few hours. :D

[Sonakshi Arora]

Hey, i hope everything is okay.

[heartspeaks]

yeah yeah it is. writers are moody . U knw right!

[Sonakshi Arora]

Haha of course.
Been there done that. ;)

[writ rajat]

you reminded me my school days to allow the school of thoughts to be readmitted to school

[Sonakshi Arora]

You want to go back?😂😂
Thanks for reading it and reviewing :)

[writ rajat]

yaaah dear

[Mr.Writer]

This is so cheesy! Great job Sonakshi!
This reminds me of a lot of things!
Once, again, great job! :)

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you very much !

[Coyote Poetry]

You create wild and dangerous place for the teacher. I liked the description of the classroom. Perfect ending for a entertaining poem.
Coyote

[Sonakshi Arora]

We cease every opportunity to trouble our teachers 😂
Thank you very much for giving it a read :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Poor teacher earn his money and you are welcome.

[Bhagyashree Bhat]

Childhood memories get unfolded after reading your poem... I enjoyed your writing.... Good flow with rhyming words... Keep the writing on dear...you surely have a great future ahead...all the very best👍

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much! 😍😍

[Bhagyashree Bhat]

My pleasure dear ☺

[Anjali]

Reminds me of my classroom. Really relatable and amusing write.😊

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much! :D

[Agnibo]

Such a lovely piece! Really made me want to go to school again. :D
Thanks for sharing, Sonakshi. :)

[Sonakshi Arora]

I am glad you liked it! :D
Thanks for reading it!

[Agnibo]

You are most welcome. :)

[LKBillips]

This one is fun and very believable. Hiding in the back of class so the teacher wouldn't notice you....ahh the memories.

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much for reading it!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Count me in your classroom and would love to play the part of musketeer lol...

I enjoyed the read and it was very nice. Great work Sonakshi.

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much! :D

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'd always been a back bencher throughout school and college but not the dreamy one, I was the sleepy one 😂 and in university, I was the middle bencher but not the tiffin stealers, the sleepy one 😂😂😂😂
I really enjoyed this poem although the second last line is something I won't agree with 😛😉
Well penned, S! 👍

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much for reading it! 😊

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh, you're welcome! It was a pleasure 😊

[Farhan Shaikh]

This make me to dwell in my school days which made me laugh, amazing piece of work sonakshi, last but not the the topic you chose is lovely

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much! How did your exam go?

[Farhan Shaikh]

It was good, I did well thanks for your wishes

[Sonakshi Arora]

Good to hear that :)