Letting- Go

You just have to let go and embrace the love.

It isn't the person that you miss
It is the memories that hurt you bad
They drench you and drown you
And all they do is make you feel sad
You went out of your way
To help him in every manner you could
No matter what happened to you
Through thick and thin you stood
You went sleepless nights to support him
And didn't know he would use and throw
But this is the pain and mistakes
That help you to blossom and grow
He only came to you when he needed help
And in the end he never stayed
You never knew he was using you
To him you were a little band-aid.
You should be happy now
For the negative has now gone
Forget all the memories; forgive the wrong
Pick up your heart and just move on
Look up little princess
Or the crown falls down
There is so much to love now
And so less time to frown

Author's Note

Constructive criticism is always appreciated!

Reviews

[Surya]

Yeah it happens, but I have seen this as vice versa in my friends life.....truly how can some one just use someone for their own happiness....i have seen him grieving, his sorrow...that was terrible.....and of course as a lady she might have felt very bad.....
True to life poem...I liked it as I related it with someone I know well....:)

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much :D

[Jackie]

It's crappy how some will do that to another but yet in the end we all seem to come out stronger as well. With most bad there is usually so good or SOMETHING beneficial about it. thanks for sharing:-)

[Sonakshi Arora]

I completely agree with you. Thank you for reading it!

[Abhishek Asthana]

Nice framed... almost like a console stuff

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you 😍

[Sofia]

Hey! It is quite relatable for those who, at some point of life might have experienced betrayal. The words are really motivating and encouraging. The rhyming was so good and absolutely flawless. Very well written :)

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you 😄

[Sofia]

My pleasure :)

[Agnibo]

Wow!! What a piece!
Really, really good. :)

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much :D

[Agnibo]

You are most welcome.

[KT-B]

I really enjoyed this poem, it flowed so well and a great message. :) well done

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much :D

[shabiyaswati]

Motivational words and excellent rhyming :) enjoyed reading it.
Do read our poem hidden blessings of life. It would be nice to get your views on it.

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much! Will definitely check it out :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

I love the end of the poem much..very good piece of work 😊

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much :D

[Giulia King]

I love how it ends with a hopeful note :) Time heals all wounds.

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you. :D

[Manasa.L]

It happens to many of them out there, and they just shatter into pieces. But you are right "You should be happy now
For the negative has now gone
Forget all the memories; forgive the wrong
Pick up your heart and just move on
Look up little princess
Or the crown falls down
There is so much to love now
And so less time to frown "
With these words you have made everyone strong. Very beautiful.

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you for the kind words :D

[Abraham George]

It isn't the person that you miss
It is the memories that hurt you bad

universal truth. That's why it says the power to forget is the best one we have

nothing more to say about this fantastic poem

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much :D