Emotionless

Sometimes I don't want to feel about anyone or anything...

Sometimes I wonder if it is good to feel
Especially when people break our heart
They don't bother the decimation they create
By ripping a raw soul apart
Maybe if I don't feel anything at all
I'll be okay when people destroy me inside
Maybe it will help my over thinking
And the pain when a part of me has died
Maybe it will be good when I cut off from here
And have a heart of stone
It won't make me feel the sadness
Of having to suffer through it all, alone
Maybe it is good not to have feelings
So people can hurt you without causing pain
It will help you feel the same all the time
And put a stop to the rivers of your night rain
So maybe it is good not to feel anything
Maybe for a while or so
People can sideline you whenever they want
And you won't even get to know!

Author's Note

Constructive criticism is always appreciated!

Reviews

[shabiyaswati]

As a fellow writer I can only imagine the emotions that one has to feel to actually pen this down! Its a really nice poem.. :)

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much :D

[shabiyaswati]

You are welcome. Do go through our work as well as your feedback will help us. :)

[Sonakshi Arora]

Gave one :) Saw your profile. You should definitely check out my 'ode to tecahers'! Thank you for your service :)

[shabiyaswati]

I will...surely!