Correct Placement of Parts 😂

A humourous piece about the right placement of our body parts and weird reasons to be grateful for....

Just be thankful that your eye is in its place
And not anywhere else on the face
Imagine it being in the place of your ear
Then with your eyes you would have to hear
Be grateful that your hair is on your head
And not in the place of your lips instead
Or else you'd have to comb your mouth
And your head gets to shout
Be happy that your fingers are on your hands
And not where the nose stands
And your toes sit on your feet
Not anywhere else I repeat
What if your neck was in the place of chin
Imagine that part being so thin
And think if your stomach was where your chest is
You would look so hilarious and get so many praises
So be grateful that your arms are in pairs
Or else, my friend, you'd get so many stares

Author's Note

Constructive criticism is always appreciated!

Reviews

[Jackie]

. that WOULD be goofy to have all those misplacements. lol. I enjoyed the rhymes myself. I actually like rhymes. I do a lot of that myself in my own. jut sounds better or me. maybe sometime you could check them out. anyway thanks for sharing with us your work of art.:-)

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much for your review :D. I will definitely check out your works. I love rhyming. I feel they add a sense of joy to poetry . Cheers!

[heartspeaks]

Crazy.... It is really amazing ... A GOOFY TALE .... keep up the good work

[heartspeaks]

Crazy.... It is really amazing ... A GOOFY TALE .... keep up the good work

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much :D