Hope

Here is giving you a new ray of hope through my new composition. Enjoy reading!

I know you're drowning inside
Your adamance to float
Reflects your deadly actions
You are in a breaking boat
Think about it again
Who did this to you?
Who broke you my love
Perhaps, Maybe someone you knew?
Maybe you just loved him
And he wasn't quite sure
Your actions were very loyal
But I bet, he wasn't too pure
So, sweetheart, why cry over someone?
Who gave you this stinging pain
Believe me my darling
His loss was actually a gain

Author's Note

Constructive criticism is always appreciated!

Reviews

[lua]

this is so comforting, these words speak so much empathy and genuine care to the reader - these words hold such a beautiful sentiment

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much :)

[Tazeen Ahmed]

beautiful write!
"I know you're drowning inside
Your adamance to float
Reflects your deadly actions
You are in a breaking boat
Think about it again"
honest and impassioned lines!

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much Tazeen! :)