Atlas

We're all holding the world up, aren't we?

Hey there Atlas;

Hold your ground.

The world might fall

If you let it down.

We're all under the weight

Of the patriarchal crown,

But you don't have(want?) to

Hear that sound.

F**k the world

But don't let it down.

We all know who we

Must astound.

Hey there Atlas;

Hold your ground.

The world might fall

If you let it down.

Did you know? There

Is world's to be found,

Unless you want to

Lay back down.

I hear the Grinds

Of shifting grounds,

But you don't have

To hear that sound.

Hey there Atlas;

Hold your ground,

The world won't fall

If you let it down.

Author's Note

Any suggestions? This is far from finished and I will be editing!

Reviews

[Daisy]

it's really amazing...... "the world won't fall if you let it down" awesome line... It really touched your heart
thumbs up for you

[Lizardo]

Not at all, I like this piece how it is and I love how you add that atlas carries our world.
This one is defetinily the best poem I read today
Really good

[SonOfaSailor]

Thank you very much!! I'm think about incorporating it into my guitar playing and turning it into a song

[Lizardo]

That would be very cool