Sawdust

A Poem by SonOfaSailor

Nature of some minds

Confidence to sawdust

as your thoughts are sawed

to pieces,

Stakes thrust into

the ground

Obeying given leases

© 2014 SonOfaSailor

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Let me know what you think and if you enjoyed it :)

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Laura Lynn

I'm really dense today, feeling illiterate like a very young military person with impoverished amounts of time for time for things, some poetic techniques displaced perhaps saw our thought to pieces as we try to fit words we want to use into forms, yet new ideas may also be created, but I meditate on leases and stakes obeying leases, yes I enjoyed it

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you:) keeping in form can definitely feel limiting

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Valkyrie Warrior

Short, blunt and to the point, my favourite kind of commutation! I love the rhyming in this piece :) Very well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thanks:) I decided to keep this one nice and simple.

9 Years Ago

It is very well done :)

Laura Lynn

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you:) keeping in form can definitely feel limiting

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Added on December 15, 2014
Last Updated on December 15, 2014

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SonOfaSailor

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I like to write, play guitar and make somebodies day a little better. I'd love to help you if I am able. I only hope that you would do the same. Write often and Read more :) more..