The way you tell the story ---
and the usage of the rhyme ---
within this scene ---
creates for the reader ---
the scenery of the battle ---
liked how the end stanza ---
differs from the rest...
gives the final touch of this saga...
oooooh a poet eh? That is always interesting to see.
Also, never before in my life have I read such a bad a*s viking poem! I am really glad that they aren't coming after me, I would be terrified. You put a picture of these strong ruthless men, toting huge weapons that could cleave me in half and frankly, I would prefer to avoid them.
AWESOME!!!
Hah, thank you very much, glad you enjoyed reading it! I have been recently watching the series ' Vi.. read moreHah, thank you very much, glad you enjoyed reading it! I have been recently watching the series ' Vikings' so i think it inspired me to write this! And they are bad a*s, i would run to the hills as well!
11 Years Ago
OMG that show is so awesome!!! I do not understand how people cannot like it. You captured the bad a.. read moreOMG that show is so awesome!!! I do not understand how people cannot like it. You captured the bad assery of that show tenfold.
11 Years Ago
Hah, thank you. Yeah it's a brilliant series, season two is fantastic so far. Far from being histori.. read moreHah, thank you. Yeah it's a brilliant series, season two is fantastic so far. Far from being historically correct, but when it's this awesome, who cares?!
F**k yeah, Viking poetry! That's honestly all I really have to say on that :p Good job. You might become a favorite!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
This popped into my head last night and i edited it a bit today. I think it had something to do with.. read moreThis popped into my head last night and i edited it a bit today. I think it had something to do with watching the series: Vikings ;) Thank you very much for all of your comments though, i'm glad you enjoy reading my work! More to come shortly!
29 year old amateur fantasy writer and dark poet from Cardiff, South Wales. Currently working on a novel with the intention of eventually making it into an expanding series.
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