Truthful Land

Just a poem about absolutely nothing to be specific, just a collection of thoughts brought together in the form of poetry..

Beauty lies in truthful land

truth is something scarce to us.

Finding love within the hearts

corrupted by the fear of us.

Why are people scared of us,

do we believe we're greater?

Do we believe that no ones greater,

that nobody made us?

Why is it we take so long to

realize our rights and wrongs,

ignorant to what we're told

until we're back where we belong

dwelling in the lonely neighborhood

we seek to leave it soon,

leave it for a better place

where we're fed by a silver spoon.

But life will never lead us to the destiny we craft ourselves,

life will only lead us to the right, if not we go to hell.

So time is very precious to me

family even greater,

God is greatest of them all

my judgement's coming later.

A jury of the angels

who've been witness to my daily life

dishing all my good deeds

in order to end my pain and strife.

Author's Note

i'm still getting back into the swing of poetry and creative writing after a very long time, so sorry if it doesn't meet the mark, but all anyone can do is try!

Reviews

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I like what you felt and you wrote about it :) This has a depth of meaning that is beautiful :) If you feel it, write it, and everything else will work itself out. I myself just recently returned to writing after a very long drought. Good work, dear poet :)

[FreeYourMind]

Thank you for this amazing review lynn! The beauty of a writer, I feel, is that sometimes they don't themselves realize the depth of what they write, sometimes its interpretations are meant for the audience! so i'm glad you found this poem to be beautiful and you appreciated the meaning you found, it means alot! :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

i am not sure that man will ever know his true destiny and that is a good thing....some people might just get too lazy...this was a good write

[FreeYourMind]

I have to say, I totally agree with you on that one! :) Thanks for reading and giving your insight, it is truly appreciated and I am ever gracious :)

[MOON]

Very good write the underlying theme of belonging trying to fit and not be judged nor judge.

[FreeYourMind]

Again, similar to Lynn's review [a couple of reviews down] the interpretations vary, and it humbles me as the writer of this poem to know that depth can be drawn from my words, thank you!

[MOON]

You welcome.

[Fabio_Cassilias]

Speaking The Truth There.
A Very good poem.Keep it up my brother.

[FreeYourMind]

Really appreciate the poem, and ever more so appreciative of the fact you liked it.. thanks for stopping by :)

[Whales]

Very good poem, I think it does meet the mark!

[FreeYourMind]

Thank you for the comment! haha, good to know I haven't lost the writers edge somewhat, but really lad you liked it! :)