Elo

A love poem that hopefully compares to the million others

E. Lo

 

A lust exists exclusively for her personality

Yet no qualms are present

On her flawless anatomy

 

Long legs have their allure for sure

But it's her soft words and warm replies

That steals my attention far more than thighs

 

Waves of black silk streak

Along the curves of her back

She's racing in my mind all day

But my heart won't mind another lap

 

If I gave her my everything

I hope she could spare a piece.

A little of her would be enough

I'd ration until I was deceased

 

I am the harmless shark

Her smile is tempting chum

There are indeed many fish in the sea

But none compare to the one

 

Author's Note

Tear it apart. I'm trying to decide between this one and "nature's pull" Your help is appreciated and I'll be sure to return the favor

Reviews

[Sir Tudor Bond]

not bad at all ...good emotional depth the way i see it