Internal struggles

Spirituality cannot be understood, without the torment of life.

Those self serving mantras,
what pain are you delivered from?

It was not until then,
when the subtle serrated thread of this world,
coerced its way around my neck;
That I knew I was fooled.

Tightening its grip, it ripped at my bronze fabric,
the very soul of my animus, lost its tenure;
and Screamed its way from my corpse.
To these knees I fell, quivering as life blood simmered.
Forcing a whisper, "Lord hear my prayer".

That moment of illogical defeat,
The instrument of torture snapped.
Falling gently to my face,
I lay in peace.

Author's Note

Always up for reviews!

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I agree with the other reviewer the ending is outstanding... Keep up the good work...

[Pax]

i really like the ending part.. your right spirituality is understood with life's tormenting challenge.. it's what life's about.. nice work

[Somebrownnerd]

Thank you for the kind words. Spirituality is often overlooked in hustle and bustle of our world.

[Pax]

yes indeed! its like a puzzle that needed to be figured out.. your welcome