A title is not nessacary in my case.Because it can speak for itself w/o being given a specific topic

A title is not nessacary in my case.Because it can speak for itself w/o being given a specific topic

A Poem by Somebody'sSoul
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This is about someone. It could be anybody but eventually it'll just be them. One day it will. Even if it is ten years from now.

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 He'll see me one day making history. He will see me being all that I can be.
 Someday I hope that boy will marry me.
 I can see it, One day he'll notice me.
 These days as of now I search for courage so we could be closer. But I've no courage that will let me speak to him.
 He barely lingers in my life. And I am quick to grab whatever chance I get.
 And find parts of his heart to put into mine.
 Our lives will one day intertwine.
 Because he is everything to me, That is just something he has yet to see.

© 2012 Somebody'sSoul


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Hmm... The verse structure is chaotic... Is that intentional, given the obvious emotions?

I liked this. Especially:
"And find parts of his heart to put into mine.
Our lives will one day intertwine.
Because he is everything to me, That is just something he has yet to see."

That was heartfelt and nice.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Cute :) Our soul mates will eventually find their way to us no matter where they are :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmm... The verse structure is chaotic... Is that intentional, given the obvious emotions?

I liked this. Especially:
"And find parts of his heart to put into mine.
Our lives will one day intertwine.
Because he is everything to me, That is just something he has yet to see."

That was heartfelt and nice.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Somebody'sSoul
Somebody'sSoul

Council Bluffs, IA



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I'm a human being. A homosapien if you will. And when I read I feel as if I'm venturing into another beings world. And when I write I can make a being up out of my world. I can make them up of anythin.. more..

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