Trust Me My Love

Trust Me My Love

A Poem by Soma-ko
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Look into my eyes. Why would I lie?

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Just wait for me here, baby girl,

And I’ll be back before noon, after I tackle the world.

Just wait for please, my darling so bright,

As I wander off, you were always my light.

 

Honey don’t worry, it’s just one more day,

Fret not about me, home is where you should stay.

Honey don’t cry when I'm gone, I promise I’ll be back,

Don’t I always return, just give me some slack.

 

Babe just keep loving me, because you’re the only on my mind,

Just remember that I love you, and that will shorten the time.

Babe just hold the fort when I'm gone, and don’t look at any other man,

I’ll be back before sunset, with more money in my hand.

© 2013 Soma-ko


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Loved this Soma...and the picture, too cute....

to me this could be read in two ways...

one a woman fretting about her loved one leaving to go work, worrying because his job is dangerous

two a woman fretting about her loved one going to earn money in a dangerous way...is it an honorable job or one that he cannot guarantee he will come back from, therefore he is lying

Of course it could be neither but I enjoyed the thought provoking read :)



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soma-ko

11 Years Ago

In a way, it's both, since both are partially right. :)



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Loved this Soma...and the picture, too cute....

to me this could be read in two ways...

one a woman fretting about her loved one leaving to go work, worrying because his job is dangerous

two a woman fretting about her loved one going to earn money in a dangerous way...is it an honorable job or one that he cannot guarantee he will come back from, therefore he is lying

Of course it could be neither but I enjoyed the thought provoking read :)



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soma-ko

11 Years Ago

In a way, it's both, since both are partially right. :)
That photo is adorable and such a unique poem Soma...really liked it and the ending...Rose:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Soma-ko

11 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it, and thank you for reading. :)

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