A Blind Man

Sightless, and clueless. A terrible combination, where even light cannot make the path known.

I cannot see darkness,

For I am in darkness.

 

I cannot see the devil,

For I am the devil.

 

But I cannot see myself,

So does the devil really exist?

 

Do I really exist?

 

If there be a god,

Does that god hate me?

 

For I cannot see.

Reviews

[HeavenSunArcadez]

deep material, very powerful lines that sound almost biblical the way u threaded them together... short and sweet though..and good message , something to really make one wonder... cause there is more than one way to be blind... dont have to be physically blind to not see whats in front of u... u relayed that message well... great write my friend

[Soma-ko]

That much is true, and sometimes we cannot see the bold underlining that lays in front of us. Thank you for the wonderful review/explanation, and thanks for reading. :)

[Saumya]

thought provoking and interesting thoughts.......!!!
very eloquent and profound....!! :)
well done..!!

keep writing and rocking,

with best wishes,
saumya

[Soma-ko]

Went thank you for the compliments Saumya, and will do.

[Saumya]

most welcome...!!1
:)

[NA]

Interesting thoughts...powerfully profound! :)

[Soma-ko]

Glad you read it. :)