The End

The End

A Poem by Soma-ko
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Where will you hide, if darkness is all that's left?

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If darkness might consume the light

Then where will I go to seek my sight.

 

For danger lurks behind my mind

While evil smirks despite the time.

 

For if darkness comes and consumes the light,

There will be nothing left but people fright.

 

For the light that came has passed away,

And all that’s left is darkness’ stay.

 

My hope has left with that of light,

As darkness comes to consume my sight.

 

© 2013 Soma-ko


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I like this, very well written.. and has multiple meanings, but most important is that once darkness falls on any part of our life... that's when everything is able to attack in the shadows, mentally and emotionally especially... cause when we cannot see whats ahead or whats around us, who knows what mind trap or physical jigsaw were walking into... a dark world thorn patch thats surely meant for pain and suffering... so the Light is needed and when it dims its up to us to change the light bulb before it goes out, sure u catch my drift... great write Soma

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soma-ko

11 Years Ago

Thank you, and I do catch your drift. Glad you liked it, and well explained once again. :)



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I like this, very well written.. and has multiple meanings, but most important is that once darkness falls on any part of our life... that's when everything is able to attack in the shadows, mentally and emotionally especially... cause when we cannot see whats ahead or whats around us, who knows what mind trap or physical jigsaw were walking into... a dark world thorn patch thats surely meant for pain and suffering... so the Light is needed and when it dims its up to us to change the light bulb before it goes out, sure u catch my drift... great write Soma

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soma-ko

11 Years Ago

Thank you, and I do catch your drift. Glad you liked it, and well explained once again. :)
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Really enjoyed this...I found it quite thought provoking! Excellent :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soma-ko

11 Years Ago

Thank you, and I'm glad it had you thinking about it. :)
Darkness. Gotta love it. I was drawn to his one because of the name. Darkness and the end, it all fits together so well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soma-ko

11 Years Ago

They really do, thanks for reading.
I enjoyed reading Soma and loved the beautiful painting too...I like the deviantart website...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soma-ko

11 Years Ago

Thank you, and their art is fantastic (I saw that Mother Earth's painting was also from there). :)
SyberRose

11 Years Ago

yes thats right...i forgot about that ha.

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Added on June 13, 2013
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Tags: Darkness, Light, End, Self, Soma

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