Her

Is it possible to ever see the same leaf after its been carried away by a breeze?

As I watch the leaves fall,

So did she.

 

A snow flake smothers her cheek,

And a breeze caresses mine.

 

For the very first time,

I realized how beautiful she was.

 

A tear rushed down my cheek.

 

Because I also realized,

That I would never see her again.

 

Like the leaves the breeze carried away.

Reviews

[OBWhiteHawk]

Damn thats heartbreaking stuff there.

[Soma-ko]

It's terrible how we see what is important only after we lose it...

[Soma-ko]

Thank you for the review.

[OBWhiteHawk]

I know what you mean, man. It is terrible. But you did a beautiful job of expressing it. And you are welcome. :)

[SyberRose]

Such a pretty poem Soma...lovely images... and I loved the painting...its beautiful...you told me you were going to post your drawings one day...Don't forget...Rose:)

[Soma-ko]

I haven't, and will probably do so during the summer. :)
My first time putting the painting in front, since I thought the small picture in the corner did it no justice. Glad you read it, and thank you for the review.

[SyberRose]

Did you do this painting?

[Soma-ko]

No no no no, I wish I had even a fraction of the artist's skill... All my pictures are provided from the lovely google images.

[SyberRose]

Its gorgeous...I will have to check it out

[Soma-ko]

I was looking up roses when I stumbled upon this, and it reminded me of this poem I've written. I'll send you a link tomorrow if you like (I'm using my phone right now, because my laptop's internet isn't working right now).

[SyberRose]

Oh okay..I hate it when that happens...

[Soma-ko]

How it frustrates me so, but I will remember nonetheless.

[SyberRose]

no hurry

[NA]

Oh I simply love this...so soft and beautiful....wonderful read :)

[Soma-ko]

Thank you very much. :)
This is actually one of my first poems, but I kept forgetting to post it.