Exterior Shell

Exterior Shell

A Poem by Soma-ko
"

Sometimes we forget who we are, because we live as someone else.

"

A pearl,

Covered with layer of gold.

So no one really knew her,

No one could ever really know.

 

They loved her for her value,

The lovely lustrous gold.

But not a single one knew,

What she really withhold.

 

So on with her life she went,

Living as gold.

With not a friend who knew pearl,

Not a single soul.

 

Soon pearl was lost,

Not sure who she really was.

Began living as gold,

Unsure what the future foretold.

© 2013 Soma-ko


Author's Note

Soma-ko
I can't say this was inspired by Storm's piece, 'Cloud 24', but this poem can be related to it a tiny bit. Not the exact same turmoil the protagonist faces, but in more of a broader aspect.

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Well I must say I never had anyone dedicate a poem to me or my character's in a novel of mine! But I must say, thank you for this! This was really nice of you and I did enjoy it. I must say it relates to the protagonist much more then you think! Both Anabelle and Storm(y) face this issue! Thank you my friend!

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This is a beautiful piece...really enjoyed :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Soma-ko

11 Years Ago

Thank you, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. :)
Nicely done Soma...its nice to be inspired by something or someone...Enjoyed reading.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Well I must say I never had anyone dedicate a poem to me or my character's in a novel of mine! But I must say, thank you for this! This was really nice of you and I did enjoy it. I must say it relates to the protagonist much more then you think! Both Anabelle and Storm(y) face this issue! Thank you my friend!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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