SEEKING HONESTY

This began as an exercise with my writer's group

The painfulness of the truth

As it mirrors another's view

No compromise -- No B.S.

At least you know

Where you stand

Is it right?

Is it moral?

I feel it is

Something we need a little more

Especially, from those

Whom we have placed our trust

Author's Note

I would appreciate any suggestion to make this better. It is a work in progress.

Reviews

[Arjun Singh]

As of yet, it certainly is nice nd gd..
Might i suggst wrking on d length a bit? I know u r capable enough of elongating dis piece, without ketting it drag or getting boring....
A refreshing read!!