Broken Spirit

"There comes a time when everyone experiences a broken spirit"

Broken behind the emotion

Resistance walls put up.

Only opening a small amount. Not

Knowing when the next stone will

Enter through the glass.

Never once remembering that I can still be

Seen through the glass. I 

Put my head down, wishing I was

Invisible. Wipe the 

Remaining shame,

Impotent spirit,

Trying against life.

~My broken spirit is the blame~

Reviews

[nono]

Yeah my spirits been broken a few times...people saying I don't know how to write...That can really hurt, but I know there are people who like it. And I wouldn't want to disappoint them now would I? Nice job though. Sometimes when your crushed remember the positive things!!

[great writer of suspens..]

luv it...it cant be rated

[H-Jonesy]

So true, and so well put. I love this peice you did a good job expressing the emotions of someone who goes through having a broken spirit, and in a simple way too.
Very well done