Broken Spirit

"There comes a time when everyone experiences a broken spirit"

Broken behind the emotion

Resistance walls put up.

Only opening a small amount. Not

Knowing when the next stone will

Enter through the glass.

Never once remembering that I can still be

Seen through the glass. I 

Put my head down, wishing I was

Invisible. Wipe the 

Remaining shame,

Impotent spirit,

Trying against life.

~My broken spirit is the blame~

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I know how you feel...I feel the hopelessness in this. I'm sorry...Thanks for sharing.

[BoSweets]

Nice write! "Never remembering that I can still be" This is an awesome line, we at times can loose ourselves and become product of environment. It's only the strong that soar through! Go Sis.
Peace
BoSweets

[china]

This is so sad but true. You touched a topic everyone can relate too. Job well done

[Jazique]

awe how said but very good.

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how emotionally sad...this tugs the heart springs as memories of times like this come flooding back. nicely done

[Hello, Goodbye]

I could continue reading forever.. really.. i could..

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the sentence structure itself is a mesmerizing emotive pull drawing anticipation~ the entire form drawn in blue is fluid in its comprehensive state of devastation in flux~ you've an expert eye for the whole composite~I've noticed this in all your poetics~

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

nice touch of emotion you put into the poem:) i love it.

[JelliFyshKissUs]

This is ingenius, my dear girl. The lines merging into one another with such a powerful message. I'm just blown away by you.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

This one..literally..tears at the heart..
Wanting to be invisible..being broken..vulnerable...
Incredibly relatable
Beautiful poem...masterfully written..magical