Of My... Oh My...

Awoke to a warm breath upon my neck
Moist the tongue that slithered by
A grip so hard upon my breast
Unleashed a moan to the release of a sigh

Then to my thigh and to my leg
Long nails streaked to find Eve nearby
To the rhythmic thrust I almost begged
To untie the ribbon of lust inside

I opened my eyes and closed them once more
So tightly, I let out a blinding scream
For there before me, upon me, stood
The Anti-Christ of a shadowed dream

Just as he scattered me to the zenith high
Both our faces, contorted, cried -
For in another place just at that time
An angel awoke to screaming 'Incubus, tis I!'

So the moral of this story is
When next my dream takes me to your side
I will pull pretty faces and promise not to cry
So as not to disturb the Gods asleep in the sky
But lull them into a gentle lullaby
Of my... Oh my... Om I... Succubi...

Reviews

[Michael Thrower]

Holy s**t. This was EPIC. First time I've ever seen another succubus/incubus poem on here. Props for the idea and props for putting it together so well. It was an amazing read, poked me right in the heart of hearts.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

This was an adventure of sensuality and creativity... very well done!

[Solilokiss]

Thank you, Poetic. Glad you enjoyed! :)

[paddy d daly]

erotic, sensual, sexual and tasteful, not easy to combine but i think you did it, really
liked...

[Solilokiss]

Thank you, Paddy. Glad you liked! :)

[Echoes of Eros]

You arouse the senses, sweet and deep, and awaken the wild wonders of the dreamish mind. What a fierce, flowing tempest of divine passion and erotic feasting. xo

[Solilokiss]

Hi Echoes! Thank you for the read and favourable review. I am glad it evokes the senses so, Much appreciated.

[MsJewel]

Soft and sensual and written in good taste. A very enjoyable read. Thanks so much for the rr.

:) Julie

[Solilokiss]

Thank you, Julie :) I'm not sure what 'rr' is.

[MsJewel]

read request

[Solilokiss]

Ah, thank you :)

[Donald]

It is very erotic and and stimulating. it leaves me with very visual images and and sensual pleasures meant for lovers. you are a very unique and interesting person.

[Solilokiss]

Thank you, Donald :) you are very kind to me. I am actually a very boring person to the majority in my life but that's because this is kept closed and protected inside. I appreciate your comments.

[Donald]

No one is ever boring, you have to be given a chance to express yourself and you express yourself in your words. Otherwise I would have to say the same about myself.

[Rod Dangers]

Very sensual but not trashy. I have written a few lusty/erotica pieces and, for me, it is the hardest genre to write as its a fine line between being sensual and pornographic. You played this one well and with the underlying imagery.
Thanks for sharing.

[Solilokiss]

Thanks, Rod. I find when I write this style, I have to be in the moment and let the words flow naturally. Appreciating the read and review.