Differences

Cain was a toad
And Abel was a frog
One leapt on a flower
The other, a log

One knew how to do it
The other tried and tried
One cussed "Oh man, I blew it!"
As the other cried and cried

For he saw his brother's efforts
And begged for his release
From his torments, toils, and troubles
"Lord, bring to him some peace"

So, from the log extended
A tongue of might and goo
It alighted upon the other
And from it, brother flew!

Greatness smiled upon them
Looking left to right
Saw no differences between them
Just a toad, a frog, and light

Reviews

[Donald]

This is a very original approach on an old tale. It is something that would appeal to everyone. You are quite talented.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

I wonder what the world would be like if their original tale was as positive as this... well done.

[Solilokiss]

I wonder on that, too, my friend. Thank you for the visit and read :)

[Rod Dangers]

What a lovely poem. Great story, great rhymes and beautiful sentiment.
If you know anyone good at art, this would be amazing illustrated.
Thanks for sharing

[Solilokiss]

Thank you, Rod, for your always kind and generous reads. It never goes unappreciated. It would be great for someone to draw this but I'd never ask that of them, though. Looking forward to reading you soon.

[Rod Dangers]

You're welcome. Theres plenty to read on my page lol Couple of new ones went up this week.
I wish i was better at art, would be great to see this drawn. :)