A Feast Of Swine

His voice dipped my mind in honey
I lingered there
Pungently purring of desire
Beckoning me for more of this
My ears erupting to his song
Of grace and virtues covered
The furs of eve had long grown warm
Lapped he, 'come with me, beloved'

Like grapes before the midway sun
Did I burst forth of sweetest wines
As manna such he was to me
I indulged upon his love, divine
Aroused I shook in ecstasy
A screeching roar fell I from the vine
Then swollen fruit now soured be
Devoured fit for the feast of swine

Reviews

[Heavensretreat]

Hallo Solilokiss - it is quite pleasant for me to read your text, because there is measure (inside and outside) and many points of view to the subject, good words in good company to another to the sentences that correspond...
Heavensretreat

[Solilokiss]

Many thanks for the visit and kind review, HR :)

[Donald]

Very provocative approach. Well done.

[Solilokiss]

Thank you Donald for the kind review :)

[SyberRose]

Nicely penned...enjoyed the theme and structure...skillfully done...Rose:)

[Archangel Gabriel]

This is such an eloquently written piece. it flows with a sensuality and uses such perfect metaphors to add to such a glorious canvas.

[Solilokiss]

Many thanks for the gracious comment, AG.

[MsJewel]

Wow! Amazing use of metaphor and imagery in this well written poem. So many lines worth remembering. Great writing my friend.

:) Julie

[Solilokiss]

Thank you Julie. Coming from you that means so much. I really appreciate it.

[Hypnos]

A feast rampant with Dionysus' madness. Very well done.

[Solilokiss]

Thank you for the feedback, Hypnos. Now that you say that, I see what you mean. Initially, I was inspired between Jesus and my love, and then it took a sour turn :) I appreciate the review.

[Hypnos]

Your very welcome