Anew

For those in contemplation of ending their life, this one's a prayer for you. Image courtesy of google / rap genius

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It's only as we pass away

That before our eyes, our life relays

Unseen hearts that loved us much

Yet time was short to show of such

 

Never play the russian wheel

Even when it pains to feel

Somewhere out there a song bird prays for you

That both eyes open, see the world, anew

Reviews

[☾Panda☽]

Woow! This was a very pleasant poem. I love reading it especially the last two sentences, I hope there comes a new world, with no pain and hate, only love. But that's only my hope haha!

x Panda

[Silent Wolf]

I am right there at the edge of the cliff now, and I'm struggling to walk away from it, but I'm barely managing. This actually helped quite a bit.

[Echoes of Eros]

Your heart and soul beat with a beautiful rhythm through your words. I was there once, standing on the razor's edge. Very thankful I stepped away.

[Solilokiss]

Thank you. I am glad you saw the light during that time :)

[WithLoveandLoss.]

Don't underestimate the maturity of your voice! This was stunning, truly intriguing. The first line reels you in, and the rest is a raw honesty captured by few writers. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

[Solilokiss]

Aww thank you for the note of encouragement. I really appreciate you stopping by for the read :)

[luciddreamer]

Honest, insightful, and beautiful, a pleasure to read...

[Solilokiss]

Thank you for your kind review. It is appreciated :) I very much look forward to reading more of you.

[wordwarrior]

Just beautiful with great word choices to create this wonderful imagery. Write on!

[Solilokiss]

Thank you, wordwarrior. Your generous review of my first placement is very much appreciated :)

It has been a while since I have wrought a creation however this wonderful place I will now call home has sparked a boom of inspiration. How talented you all are.

Thank you.

[falling_toxic_rain]

wow lovely. I like word choice.

[Solilokiss]

Awe, thank you :) I really appreciate your feedback. It has been a while since I've written, and I was intimidated and full of doubt. Thank you for offering your kind gesture of reassurance with your comment.

[falling_toxic_rain]

no problem :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Uplifting and inspirational.....you may have saved someone today with your well written rhyming words. Lydi**

[Solilokiss]

Hi Lydi, thank you so much for saying that. For that to have happened or happen at some point in time, would truly be wonderful and everything I could hope for. Your reflection of that is very much appreicated.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)

[Solilokiss]

Thank you, Sami. I appreciate your feedback.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)