cursed memories

its between 4 and 5 am and I'm lonely and high and my brain is turning empty and voidful again.

1. These thoughts, these cursed memories
2. [5:19 AM]

   They will follow me
3. [5:19 AM]

   They'll keep swimming back and forth unwanted
4. [5:20 AM]

   I won't be able to live in peace for the rest of my life
5. [5:20 AM]

   It'll keep coming back to disturb me
6. [5:20 AM]

   I cannot get my closure
7. [5:20 AM]

   I'm stuck with an open gaping wound
8. [5:20 AM]

   It won't heal, it gives me seizures
9. [5:20 AM]

   It keeps coming back to me
10. [5:20 AM]

    I want to forget them
11. [5:20 AM]

    They're cursed memories

Author's Note

i literally dont know anything about poetry, I'm 18 but I still feel 13, and its 5am and I'm high... although I think I would like to improve so feedback is cool

Reviews

[Ray]

I don't feel I can have much an input considering my own inexperience, but I think this is pretty good. Perhaps the grammar could use some work, but within the writing itself there aren't any particular flaws that stand out to me. Neat poem!

[Solilo]

jeez what is this dude, booooooo